Wednesday, 14 September 2016

Walking

“Time to go to School” said dad, “Ok” said Lucy and Ben.Later that day Ben and Lucy Were walking to school It was sunny And had lots of trees like a Forest.

 After that a girl named cyco Hazel Do you want to tag with me. Then Ben and Lucy said yes. Then they started to tag.

 Afterwards the principle called Ben and Lucy’s dad on the phone And ask “where is Lucy and Ben”. Then dad said “they are at school”.Then the principal said no so dad went and looked for Lucy and Ben.Leader dad found Lucy and Ben tagging.Then had a meeting with the principle.

1 comment:

  1. Oh my goodness Auckland, what a great story! You have used paragraphs, dialogue, speech marks, you remembered your capital letters and full stops in the right places. Amazing!
    I think your next steps can be elaborating more - instead of just saying 'trees like a forest'. What kind of trees? What do they look like? What would the leaves feel like?

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