Monday, 28 November 2016

EOTC recount

WALT: use time words in a recount
SC: I can highlight 5 time words I have used in my recount
Instructions: You must write a recount about what you did last week for EOTC week.
A recount is a story about something that has already happened - something in the past.
In recounts, we use words like
  • First
  • Next
  • Then
  • Afterwards
  • Before
  • Later on
  • And days of the week - Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Friday

Your task is to write a recount about your week. You can add pictures if you want to.
Before posting on your blog, highlight any time words you have used. You MUST use at least 5 of these.

For your blog:
Labels - tps, year4, writing
Title: WALT use time words in a recount


Start writing here:

On Monday room 6,7 and 8 went to bowling and lazer strike.At bowling the imploes put up rails so the ball can’t go on the side.When we finished all the 10 rounds.It showed all of our scores and it said I came 3rd.The person who came 1st got 140 points.

At lazer strike We had to split into three groups. The groups were Red,Blue and Green.Before we started playing we had to watch a video about how to activate the gun.Inside the arena was dark and our vest was glowing.


On wednesday the 23th we our teacher miss Ashley ‘’said’’ after lunch time we are going to do the slip & slid’’and my class was shouting mabe the whole world could hear us.Then when it was morning tea the boys from room 8 were setting up the slip & slid and room 6,7,and 8 was so excited about it, so the toke there T-shirt off and was going to jump on the slide but it was not lunchtime yet so i put it back on.Then the ball rang when i put my T-shirt than the ball rang again and i ‘’said’’ that means it is lunch time then everyone went in a line and jumped in the slip and slid.

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