Sunday, 26 March 2017

ROOM 7 VS ROOM 8 LINE BASKETBALL

ROOM 7 VS ROOM 8 LINE BASKETBALL

On Monday 27 March room 7 were gonna go to kiwisport but it was canceled.

After we knew kiwisport was canceled Miss Ashley suggested we should play line basketball.After that when we were walking outside Miss Morrison asked if they Room 8 can play with then Miss Ashley said “Yes”.

When it was my turn  I was running fast as lightning and the our team  got a goal.

When the game finished the score was 4 to 1
That means we won. Then we shaked each others hand and my teacher said to be humble winners and gracious losers.


Marking my story!
Ideas
Structure and Language
Organisation
Vocabulary
Sentence Structure
Spelling
Punctuation
R3
R2
R3
R2
R2
R2
R2
Total score (add the numbers next to the R’s altogether)
16
My E-asttle score is … (click here and see what your score is)
1P

1 comment:

  1. Auckland you need to explain your ideas more. Remember the burger model? What happened when we walked outside, we lined up, walked downstairs, sat on the yellow line boy girl boy girl. Like that.

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