ROOM 7 VS ROOM 8 LINE BASKETBALL
On Monday 27 March room 7 were gonna go to kiwisport but it was canceled.
After we knew kiwisport was canceled Miss Ashley suggested we should play line basketball.After that when we were walking outside Miss Morrison asked if they Room 8 can play with then Miss Ashley said “Yes”.
When it was my turn I was running fast as lightning and the our team got a goal.
When the game finished the score was 4 to 1
That means we won. Then we shaked each others hand and my teacher said to be humble winners and gracious losers.
Marking my story!
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Ideas
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Structure and Language
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Organisation
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Vocabulary
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Sentence Structure
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Spelling
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Punctuation
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R3
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R2
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R3
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R2
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R2
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R2
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R2
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Total score (add the numbers next to the R’s altogether)
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16
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1P
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Auckland you need to explain your ideas more. Remember the burger model? What happened when we walked outside, we lined up, walked downstairs, sat on the yellow line boy girl boy girl. Like that.
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