IALA: freestyle writing.
Sun City
The eagle perched. The jaguar stalked.
The travellers trudged. The vultures soared.
Something amazing was happening at sun city. All creatures great and small were gathering around waiting to see what happens at the moot.
Sun city was a city in the middle of the desert and still stands today.
It was a city full of terrific sightseeing. It was a place like nothing else. It was dangerous , mysterious and adventurous.
It was the annual moot. A ‘moot’ is a special kind of meeting, usually to make important decisions.
The people who attended the moot was the king of egypt and his disciples.
King of egypt proclamation was that his son will be the new King.
THe king was very selfish , he would take everything for himself and his family. Leaving the people of egypt hungry and sick.
So when he declared his son to be king everyone was thrilled.
His son was the kindest person you will ever meet.
He was kind and caring person that always put others before him.
His name was King Ramesses II.
Kia Ora Auckland!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Julia and I am a year 8 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
Ka Pai! This piece of writing is absolutely amazing! I love the description in this writing.
It is great that you added a photo as it is ideal in a blog post. This reminds me of when we do free writing.
Did you enjoy this? Would you do it again?
To improve, maybe add why you did this and your favourite part!
Nga Mihi,
- Julia