WALT: be descriptive with detail.
During the holiday
On the second week of the school holidays my brothers and I were heading to church for a church
activity.
It was a sunny day but I was getting dehydrated from the sun.
Eventually my brothers and I made it to church.
activity.
It was a sunny day but I was getting dehydrated from the sun.
Eventually my brothers and I made it to church.
Firstly, when I was arrived at church I saw my friend AJ playing so I went and joined him.
The game that he was playing is dodgeball. Suddenly when I was playing I got hit in the head by the
dodgeball. I felt sad because my ear was ringing like a bell.It sounded like FTANNNNG.
The game that he was playing is dodgeball. Suddenly when I was playing I got hit in the head by the
dodgeball. I felt sad because my ear was ringing like a bell.It sounded like FTANNNNG.
Soon After dodgeball my friends and I were eating takeaways. We had pizza and fried chicken.
It was delicious and yummy . After we ate went outside to play soccer.
But when we were playing a lady from our church came outside and growled at us
because we were playing on wet grass. She said “Sole alu totonu le falesa”.
It was delicious and yummy . After we ate went outside to play soccer.
But when we were playing a lady from our church came outside and growled at us
because we were playing on wet grass. She said “Sole alu totonu le falesa”.
Afterwards my friends and I headed inside for a drink. Before very long AJ shaked my other
friend's drink while he was in the toilet. Then when my friend came back he opened his drink and the
drink erupted like a volcano.
friend's drink while he was in the toilet. Then when my friend came back he opened his drink and the
drink erupted like a volcano.
Finally my brothers and walked back home. When we arrived home we had to clean our and room the
house. As soon as we finished cleaning we watched a movie.
house. As soon as we finished cleaning we watched a movie.
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